Comma Sense: Sexy Descriptions

Adjective series: When you have more than one adjective in a row, separate them with commas.

All Maria had ever wanted was a skilled, caring lover who knew how to top her.

Now you try:

Sexy long elegant legs have always turned me on.
Their bodies rocked to the same raunchy quaking motion all night long.

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    • Mags
    • June 5th, 2010

    Sexy, long elegant legs have always turned me on.
    Their bodies rocked to the same raunchy, quaking motion, all night long.

  1. Thanks for playing, Mags! You rock! And your answers are almost perfect. Here are the sentences again, as I would punctuate them.

    Sexy, long, elegant legs have always turned me on.

    Their bodies rocked to the same, raunchy, quaking motion all night long.

    • Mags
    • June 8th, 2010

    I really don’t have a grasp on commas! Good thing I’m learning something here.

  2. Funny, Mags. I have known you awhile and received many email from you and even read some of your writing for other projects over the years, and I have never thought of you as comma-challenged. It just goes to show that EVERYONE can use a brush up on grammar and punctuation.

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